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Tuesday 15 July 2014

Holiday Reading-Rewrite the ending

Coraline

Now that the other mother was gone forever she can never get out. Of course.... SHE can not get out. Her hand got out and Coraline saw it. she needed somewhere to hide the key so she won’t get out(except for her hand that's already out), she thought and thought until she got an idea. Coraline went outside going the direction where the well with her blanket so Coraline can drop the key, the Beldams hand was following her quietly as an mouse. When the hand gazed at Coraline dropping the key in the well but then suddenly The Beldams hand pranced out from the side and tried to get the key but Coraline tricked it and the hand fell into the well. Tomorrow there was a small party with her neighbours.