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Thursday 19 November 2015

Writing Sample with critical friend

Today I partnered up with for each of us to comment on each other's sample. We each have the job of being a Critical friend. Critical friends help find the faults in our writing: Like words that don't make sense, missing letters, and sentences that need to be fixed. To do all this we used a writing toolbox to critique for each other on different levels from 1-7. The sections are all different; there are punctuation, vocab, organisation, sentence structure, structure and language, and ideas.

Friday 13 November 2015

Science



Science at Tamaki College was very stimulating. The year 7/8 learnt about the four main features of science also known as the strands: they are living, material, physical, planet earth and beyond. We did a tally chart for the people who had the most favorite food choices, I chose chocolate sundae. But overall, the day was great